its okay. i mean, it's not bad. it needs work though. try making it a little longer because this movie has potential to be really funny.
this is a newgrounds movie masterpiece. the effort and art you put into this movie is absolutely amazing. you have succeeded in telling a story thats good and enjoyable that most newgrounds post don't have.
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